THE DESCENT OF MAN by Kevin Desinger
“I had made a mistake in judgment, and it just kept going, rolling into a larger and larger ball, and I was in the middle of it, tumbling out of control.”
Review by Poornima Apte Â (JUN 22, 2011)
The Descent of Man could be used as Exhibit A in how to write a taut plot-driven story. The story catches you from the opening line and just never lets you go. If youâ€™re looking for a fast beach read, look no further.
Jim Sandusky is an everyman holding down a steady job when one day, he looks out the window of his house and sees thieves trying to get away with his car. He tells his wife to stay away from the window and call the police, while he goes down to investigate. Instead of leaving the police to take care of the thieves, in a split second, Jim gets into the thievesâ€™ truck and drives it away. Whatâ€™s worse, he abandons the truck a short distance away and totally bashes it in.
This one split-second decision will come back to haunt Jim and make his life fraught with tension, if not downright misery. As it turns out the duo that was stealing Jimâ€™s car is a set of violent brothers. And yes, they want to exact revenge on the sicko who bashed their car in.
So Jim is constantly living in fearâ€”wary of who might be waiting for him around the corner. Between the weight of this problem and keeping it secret from his wife Marla, he gradually becomes an insomniac, trawling the streets of his city up to the early morning hours. â€śWhen you commit a crime, you replay it again and again,â€ť he thinks, â€śYou think about how you might have done things another way.â€ť
And this is precisely what happens to Jim. Unfortunately for him, Jim canâ€™t even confide in a friendly cop, Sergeant Rainey, who assures Jim he can do a lot to relieve him of his troubles. All Jim has to do is to be honest and recount the fateful nightâ€™s events faithfully. Jim doesnâ€™t.
What makes The Descent of Man a good read is that Jimâ€™s actions and every decision seem so very plausible. Itâ€™s almost as if this could happen to each one of us. As his life spins out of control, itâ€™s hard not to feel some relief in knowing itâ€™s not you in that situation.
The Descent of Man is not without its faults. For one thing, the dialog is a little cheesy at times. â€śThink of yourself as a slice of bread, and theyâ€™re a can of Drano,â€ť Sergeant Rainey tells Jim about the brothers. â€śAfter they come in contact with you, all thatâ€™s left is a puff of smoke and little crusty bits.â€ť Additionally, the plot falters at the very end and the copâ€™s actions seemed a little too neat and implausibleâ€”especially given how totally believable the plot is until then.
Overall though, The Descent of Man turns out to be a fairly good read. Through his forays into Jimâ€™s and Marlaâ€™s delicate relationship, Desinger shows us he is plenty capable of character-driven writing as well. The coupleâ€™s struggles with infertility and the effects it has on each of them, are portrayed heartbreakingly well.
Even if the book is not crackling with scintillating dialog, or at least the wisecracking kind that one would expect from such a book these days, it exudes an honest empathy that makes The Descent of Man an extremely fun and fast read. The best thrillers narrate events that are slightly off course yet ever so believable. Jim Sandusky is the epitome of John Doe and as his life spirals out of control, itâ€™s hard to look away. â€śAdrenaline turns a guy into an ape sometimes,â€ť Sergeant Rainey says. No new revelation there. The more interesting reveal is just how fine a line exists between civilized and feral behavior. It is this revelation thatâ€™s the scariest to digest and what makes The Descent of Man a page-turner.
|AMAZON READER RATING:||from 2 readers|
|PUBLISHER:||Unbridled Books (May 3, 2011)|
|AVAILABLE AS A KINDLE BOOK?||YES! Start Reading Now!|
|AUTHOR WEBSITE:||Kevin Desinger|
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